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Joined: Oct 2007 Gender: Female  Posts: 15 Location: nightclan camp Karma: 0 |  | ShadowStar « Thread Started on Oct 13, 2007, 12:57am » | |
Starting out; Name:ShadowStar
Gender:She-Cat
Age:25 moons
Clan:NightClan
Rank:Leader
Main Body;
Pic:![[image]](http://www.northrup.org/Photos/cat/low/black-cat2.jpg)
Appearance:pitch black beautiful cat, with a slim slender body, and long slender tail and legs+front legs. she had shork whiskers, but a little black nose. her claws are sharp and peircing, her teeth are just as sharp.her fur is long but well kept, and clean. her ears are pointed, and ripped naturally. she has small paws, but large sharp claws. her mouth is not flat, but not long either.
Personality:she is moddy, and wont stop entil her point is across, she never jokes around, enless its with her close friends, including the deputy, and med.cat, and some other cats in nightclan. she beilieves in starclan, and wont be ready to join them for many moons. her tail will shoot up a jolt of pain, if she isnt doing something right, isntgoing the right way, or is being led into danger, she uses her tail as a tool, to save what starclan wants to be done.its hard to make shadowstar beileive what you say, you will have to prove it some way, or another. she has many secrets from all the cats in her clan, from all there backrounds to just normal secrets, she isnt the type of cat to tell every cat, other cats personal imformation.personally, she doesnt really like the other clans, especiallyduskclan, she went to that clan for help first and they made her leave. she loves kits, there tiny mewls, make her proud and happy, there little bodys are cute, and its funny to watch them walk around, and takkle there brothers and sisiters. she likes apprentices too, there a little bigger then kits, but still small, they are cute and friendly still, and she thinks its fun to watch them train aswell. once they become warriors, she treats them like adult cats, and not like kits anymore, she feels proud when they do something awsome, and punishes when doing something wrong. she defenitly respects all the elders from all the clans, they have lived for a long time, and know the stories from long ago...
History:she was once a rogue, wondering the forestes, and hunting her own prey, one day she found her way into a new territory, and was captured by there cats, she was taken to there camp, and held prisoner. later they found she was no use as prisoner and asked if she wanted to join, she joined then and trained many apprentices. later after, nightclans deputy died, and they made shadowstar deputy, many moons passed after that and she became leader. before she joined the clans, she had 2 kits traveling with her, they were sent to live with the kittypets. she never forgave the old leader for doing this to her kits, she visited them, when aloud to but one day the twolegs took them to a knew home, leaving shadowstar with no family...alot of cats know about her life and try and make her feel better when she starts thinking about it, and a couple toms tried to be her mate, she refused, it would cause her to much pain to try and replace them, they weren her family, and no other kits with a random tom would ever make up or replace them, she would always have an empty hole in her stomach if she did, so she stays mateless
The End;
IC:shadowstar hurried across the forest floor, her belly draging along the dirt, and the leaves, there was prey lurking in the bushes, scuttling back and forth, shadowstar inched forwards, making no sound. the mouse scurried out of the bush and was in clear view.....sadowstar pounced, and landed on the little brown mouse, it squeaked loudly, and shadowstar chomped down quickly to end its pain., she carried the small warm body, past many trees, and threw many holes in the ground, finally she found a place to burry it.shadowstar dug the hole quickly, and slided the mouse in, burring it again, she lifted her head a couple times, to try and get a wiff, of more prey "scrrruusssh" she turned, there was an intuder, it was already flinging itself towards her.shadowstar let out a deep growly hiss of fury, and leped onto her two hind legs, her paws and claws in the air pointed towards the enimy.shadowstar pounced, and the two cats met in battle, she grabed hold of the cats neck, and chomped down, the cat howled, but shadowstar didnt let go, causing the cat pain, was worth it, since the cat just about killerd her.shadowstar let go finally and the cat fell limp, it was alive, but it was in to much pain to care wether it lived or not, so shadowstar grabed hold of the cats scruff and started draging it towards camp.....
Other: nothing else
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Joined: Oct 2007 Gender: Female  Posts: 37 Location: In a corner, forgotten Karma: 2 |  | Re: ShadowStar « Reply #1 on Oct 13, 2007, 8:12am » | |
Please make sure you have 7 sentences for appearance, 2 paragraphs of 6 sentences for personality, and 3 paragraphs of 6 sentences for history. Also, 200 words for IC.
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Joined: Oct 2007 Gender: Female  Posts: 15 Location: nightclan camp Karma: 0 |  | Re: ShadowStar « Reply #2 on Oct 13, 2007, 9:24am » | |
ok did it
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Joined: Oct 2007 Gender: Female  Posts: 37 Location: In a corner, forgotten Karma: 2 |  | Re: ShadowStar « Reply #3 on Oct 13, 2007, 1:57pm » | |
You need to have 2 paragraphs of 6 sentences for personality, and 3 paragraphs of 6 sentences for history to be accepted. You need another sentence and a full other paragraph for personality, and a couple more sentences + 2 more paragraphs for history.
Sorry if I'm sounding strict Shadow.
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Joined: Oct 2007 Gender: Female  Posts: 15 Location: nightclan camp Karma: 0 |  | Re: ShadowStar « Reply #4 on Oct 13, 2007, 2:34pm » | |
done -.-
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Joined: Oct 2007 Gender: Female  Posts: 37 Location: In a corner, forgotten Karma: 2 |  | Re: ShadowStar « Reply #5 on Oct 13, 2007, 2:38pm » | |
Sorry again, but I don't count...*does simple math* 18 sentences for history. I need a firm bio to accept it as leader. I'd recommend taking out some of those commas and added periods.
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Joined: Oct 2007 Gender: Female  Posts: 15 Location: nightclan camp Karma: 0 |  | Re: ShadowStar « Reply #6 on Oct 13, 2007, 3:06pm » | |
-.- -_- done.......*gets a little anoyed*
DONE DONE DONE DONE
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Joined: Oct 2007 Gender: Female  Posts: 37 Location: In a corner, forgotten Karma: 2 |  | Re: ShadowStar « Reply #7 on Oct 13, 2007, 3:10pm » | |
Sorry once again Shadow, but I keep counting 6 sentences for history, you need at least 3 paragraphs of that, so 12 more sentences are needed.
Sorry for sounding so strict.
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Joined: Oct 2007 Gender: Female  Posts: 15 Location: nightclan camp Karma: 0 |  | Re: ShadowStar « Reply #8 on Oct 13, 2007, 3:33pm » | |
she has no more history thought... plz just accept it now, ive said all i can about herm history, thats her life, she was a rogue, and got accepted into a clan, end of story, theres no more to add.... plz....theres no more....
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Joined: Oct 2007 Gender: Female  Posts: 37 Location: In a corner, forgotten Karma: 2 |  | Re: ShadowStar « Reply #9 on Oct 13, 2007, 3:38pm » | |
Very well,
accepted.
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